Unfourtanatly we can not accept that for this competition.
First of all it needs to be a story that everyone agrees is easy to understand, neutral, factual, publishable etc. n:user:Cspurrier feels that it isn't publishable currently citing "It is very hard to understand what this is about"
It needs to be three paragraphs long. Although technicly it is three paragraphs, a paragraph has to be more then one sentence to be a paragraph for the purposes of this competition.
However, I understand you're a very new user, so some allowances can be made. If you can get it up to acceptable standards, it will be counted. If you need any help figuring out what is acceptable please feel free to ask me or anyone else. Bawolff02:46, 23 May 2006 (UTC) P.S. you list this as article 2. do you have an article 1?[reply]
